Ciphra, the others bring up some really valid points here. So, until you address their concerns, your sheet is declined. And remember what I said in PMs about your sentiments on weaknesses.

Kokurokoki, your sheet checks out so far. I just want his personality (He's nice, what else?) and appearance expanded a bit. But you did say it's a work in progress. So, for now, throw it in the character deposit.