[quote=Durnehviir]
@gothpuppy95,Well, if things are going to get moving along then I'd like to take the initiative, hopefully not against Prince's wishes, I'm going to offer some preliminary advice on your character, Gothpuppy. I would suggest, seeing as you are creating an original clan, that you list, in detail, the specifics of that clan, beyond simply just a few physical traits. Whether you do it in history or misc, offer a little insight on the Yoru clan. Try to flesh them out as well as you can, especially in their history and how others would treat or look at them. (seeing as they most likely stand out). The only other problem I have with this application that is still a work in progress is the Flying Swallow. It is a simplistic and straight forward technique, however I'd like to stress that it requires a great deal of chakra affinity and control to be able to manage the technique, especially to coat an entire katana/scythe. I wouldn't outright say the character couldn't do it, especially if there is a good reason to back it up, however such advanced chakra control is typically too advanced for a Genin to do outright. I'd say it would be more realistic if your character could perform the technique or if they were able to do it around kunai, to a limited length, then it would be more reasonable. Though, such an adept ability isn't an academy level power and I suggest, if you were planning on keeping it, to explain some sort of limitation to the ability.In anycase, I look forward to reading the completed profile.
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I intended for him to use the flying swallow on just Kunai until he had trained enough to actually put it on the Scythe which i would have created a variant of the jutsu on the custom section.
Thank you for the advice on the character I will make sure to take it into account as I keep working on it.