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Your foreshortening is good. The biggest problems I see is the structure of the face. For an anime style, the right side looks good. But I feel like the left eye is angled oddly, and needs to be drawn facing the viewer more, and we should see less of the ear too, but just a tad less. I think its mostly the left eye. The second problem, and the biggest in my opnion, is the background. I feel like the background is competing with your subject. I think even just filling in the white with some other (lighter/ less saturated) color would do good, and It also never hurts to make your background fade gradually following the lightning of your subject. So darker in the lower left corner, and lighter in the upper right with the light source. I also feel like more contrast on the subject wouldn't hurt, but honestly since your drawing more of an anime style anyway I'm not sure how necessary that would be. Like I said earlier, your foreshortening is pretty damn good.