[quote=ReaptheMusic]
mmmm you are a touch stiff. think of it like this.Why is your character saying the things he is? What emotion will he have? Is he passionate, blunt, or outright boisterous? All these will really help when V.A.'ing ^^ I did a little bit a while back. A production that never went through of an abridge Soul Eater XPPlus you have a runny nose. For what its worth I think you did well. Everyone could use tweaks is'all. :3
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Thanks for the advice. Really appreciate it :). My main problem I guess is, I have no idea what sort of character Stormvhak is :lol. I'm not sure if he's supposed to be the stereotypical, "lead-by-example" and fatherly leader, a more serious and practical commander, or something else entirely. Which kind of left me conflicted as to what sort of emotions he should have (along with what sort of lines he'd say).