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"This life isn't the best one, but it's best that I keep this one."Name. Martin DurantAge: 16Species: WitchMalePersonality: Quiet and reserved, Martin prefers to keep to himself. He would much rather be reading or practicing his swordplay than going about the town with his classmates.Personality Quirks: Only a fear of heightsLikes: Beef stew, philosophyDislikes: Fish, the aforementioned heightsActivity Pledge: I'm available every day, with the exception of afternoon of the 26th-evening of the 27th. Apart from that, I'll guarantee a post every dayResidence: Durant's Forge, Castello Leone.Bio: Waiting for other postsSkills: Expert swordsman, very knowledgeable about magic (though he sucks at actually using it), capable blacksmith.Description 5'6", 160 lbs, brown hair, brown eyes, red shirt, brown pants (Google fu failing me on a picture)
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On to the grading process!
While it is perfectly fine to create a witch character, keep in mind that witches were banished from Castello Leone with the rest of the non-human residents. I'd let it slide, but the isolation of humans and other races is a vital conflict in our plot. Also, your CS seems a bit rushed (lack of complete sentences). Take the time to write out your thoughts clearly, so it can be read clearly. Try to mention at least 5 things for likes and dislikes. While I respect your character's personality being revealed IC, I would appreciate it if you added more. Try for a paragraph, as IC you will be expected to write a minimum of 3 paragraphs every post.