Alright, I ended up being slightly more busy than expected. I updated the OP to make it [i]slightly[/i] easier for magic users to understand. But even the tabletop rules are nearly incomprehensible at times, so what can you do.

Both characters look sweet. Accepted! :nat

Blue Demon, I was wondering if your character maybe oughta have a few more adept powers? Melanin Control, Kinesics or Sustenance might fit her.
Ollumhammersong, good call on the Bulldog. I like your character pic! Shadowrun Return is excellent. As for drones, I'm not really gonna limit you. Personally, I'm a sucker for riggers with armies of mini- and microdrones, but get what you want. Two or three drones of above-mini-size would make sense, considering the mobile workshop.

As for cybereyes, how about we just handwave it and say everyone with cybereyes has low-light vision, flare comp and such? Makes it a bit simpler and still lets people shop around if they want to stuff a tool laser in there and whatnot.