[quote=Scarifar]
In your post, Jacque says "You see, ...". There is currently very little indication that Michelle has revealed her gender. Just saying, so you might wanna fix that.
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ok, editing now
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T'is done. Also, am I the only one that finds the idea of someone referring to everything inside of a body but bone as "meaty bits" to be funny? For the life of me I can't remember where I heard that from, but i'm glad I heard it.