[quote=vancexentan]
If I may give my two cents Savo I think Show's backstory needs a lot more work. I've seen bigger CS's on my early Free section. I'm not one to sound like an elitist when I'm not a gm but everyone here has a bigger history section. Unless it's a work in progress in which case I withdraw my criticism and apologize.
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Did you mean Sho, or Snows app?

Snow should probably add a bit more about his backstory imo. For Sho? I'm kind of ok about it, however, it is his decision to alter it in any other ways that he feels like.

Also, I need to stop making my character too much of an overly dramatic person... Actually, screw it, I'm altering my post.