I personally think Silent's post is within the bounds of character opinion but I suggest removing the "ill-fitting clothing" part so that Reed doesn't come off too much of a nerd. He got to have some respectable clothing in his wardrobe if he has a badass side. Change or no change, the post is still acceptable. Just wanted to have my two-cents on the matter :)

EDIT: @Poly, just wanted to tell you that you may trigger certain outcomes depending on your next or couple posts.