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Name:Lord Draxis Felwind
Age: Unknown
Race: Lichborne
Side: Razgar's Tribes
Appearance: [img=http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/303/a/d/deathknight_tryndamere_by_stoletck-d4efj9p.jpg]
Personality: He is cold, heartless and knows no peace or mercy. 
Backstory: Draxis used to be a human in an age now forgotten, but when he was resurrected, he became fueled with the desire to eradicate the Armanian Union. This hatred and blood lust stemmed from a betrayal when he was lord of his own keep in the south of the old human empire. When he was a young lord, the age of 34, he was assassinated by his own kind as a way to buy power and gain riches. This festered in his mind until his dying breath, life choked out by the edge of a blade. Several hundred years later, a necromancer brought life back into the old bones of the frail lord, but could not control the rage that grew inside of Draxis. The result of the weakness in the necromancer caused the ancient lord to run about the country, creating havoc and terrifying the country-siders. This continued for about ten years until a lich of great power took him into his charge and turned his brittle bones into something more, made him a being of flesh, bone and rage. His body took form and he gained a voice again, not just the wretched screams of a tormented soul, but a voice that commanded fear and darkness itself. Draxis was gifted with a fel armor and blade. These gifts bestowed to him through the power of the lich who had claimed him were fueled by the same power, a power that would then tear apart his already fragile mind. The blade turned the souls of those he had slain with it into more power and into a raging voice of hundreds in his mind, and the armor allowed him to channel those souls into his dark magic. During his time in the lich’s service, he gained asylum within Razgar’s lands and was accepting into his war band as a frontline soldier in the war to come because of his hatred and malice towards the humans. Upon receiving this honor, he decided to erect a new keep to glorify his victories and his power, retaining his title as lord and remaining an ever present terror to both sides of the warring nations
Weapon: Blade of the Lichborne – It has the ability to strip the souls of foes that he has slain, adding to his power and adding those souls to his [hider=consciousness]to explain the adding to his consciousness; it means that the souls of the dead plague his mind and memories. He lives through their hate and anger [/hider].
Magics: Dark Spirit Magic. He can channel the souls of the dead that he has accumulated into energy that he can either use to attack, defend or support himself. He can use the souls to envelop and trap his opponents or he can use them to create a solid wall. He can use the souls to patch wounds on himself or use them to torment his foes.
Other: At first glance I’m sure this oc looks over powered, but I’ll be sure to keep him in check and do my best to not over exaggerate him or go out of my way to seem like a jerk.
Strength: Great fortitude in physical combat, ability to withstand the elements and immense physical strength. Has command over darker emotions, evoking fear and despair in those who he comes across.
Weakness: Holy Magic and people of divinity