[quote=Draconilian]
I forgot to mention the four finisher rings aren't there anyway (Special Blizzard Lightning Grav) What if I just used it as it's actual purpose of increasing/decreasing gravity instead the the Telekinesis used in the show? I'll just remove it if I can't get a good compromise, no big loss.
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That can work.

[quote=Andion Isurand]
Alrighty, I added more to the CS for my character.
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The backstory is perfect. Powers is good, but could be better explained, at least in my mind. Personality is still barebones. Here's a tip: try writing a sentence for each of the words you used to describe the personality.