While I can't attest to anything about the character side of things because I'm not the GM, I will say that reading your sheet gives me the sense of a more modern time and not the 1800's when this game is set. For instance, living with one's significant other without being married was scandalous in that day and age, especially among people who had enough money to attend university, so you might want to find a way to explain that in the context of the era.

Also, women were only rarely allowed educations at universities. It was generally done in the home by private tutors though it's possible that Anthony's girlfriend was one of the rare exceptions.

It's awesome to get another SOHNS member, though! I'm sure Joseph will probably make a couple of attempts to schmooze Anthony if he's in leadership positions at all.