[quote=Whirlwind]
[i]Character Sheet[/i]
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[b]Please Revise[/b]

Hi there Whirlwind! 
After discussing with my Co-Gm, we've both come to agree that your CS is not quite ready to be accepted. I will have what we need fixed below for you.
[hider=Please Fix]
- Your powers are, in their current state, a bit overbearing. As of now, it appears that in any close quarter combat Dixie is nearly unstoppable. Her strength matched with her impeccable health regeneration seems a bit...much. I'd advise you to remove your regeneration.

- Lastly, both datadogie and I have agreed that your bio is a little jumbled. If she were to have murdered her father - who happened to be the reverend, how would their be no investigation - no trial? I would also like to hear a little more about this woman, Fallah. Also a little more information about how these powers came to play with your character would be nice. Though the latter is not required, that can be left a mystery to reveal later in the IC.[/hider]