[quote=DragonBeastMode]
[i]Character Sheet[/i]
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[b]Please Revise[/b]

Hey there DragonBeastMode, your character idea was very original and different, fun to read. However, there were a few instances where your character seemed a little OP: otherwise, Ms. Mathews was [i]beautifully[/i] done. See what I did there? 
Sorry, I'm horrible, I know. 
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Anyway, the only thing I'd recommend fixing would be her Seduction move. If I allowed this, it would be me enabling you to control another character - which I know you wouldn't do because you read the rules, but this power still is teetering on that fine line. I apologize, as it is a good power, but it would be too over-powered for the roleplay. This is just a suggestion, but...If Kisses Galore was to be a leader type, going off on her own whether it benefited the team or not, does not fit into a leader role. [/hider]

[quote=Charlie]
[i]Character Sheet[/i]
[/quote]
[b]Please Revise[/b]

Bonjour Charlie, I like the way you put the biotic a into play. There is one thing that you will need to adjust in order to be accepted. You will find it below. 
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- Before I can accept your sheet, you should probably read the rules.[/hider]