- All sheets go in the character deposit.

- Admitting your character is a carbon copy from an existing work is definitely a red flag.

- Could you elaborate on his condition a bit? You say he's freakish, only live for a certain amount of time, and etc, etc, but that's it. Is he deformed, or...?

- Expand on his personality and appearance a bit more. It's rather barebones, and I personally think it's lack.

- I am always iffy about emotion changing powers. Especially when they barely have limits. That said, the ability has no real weaknesses, limitations or drawbacks, and there's literally nothing stopping him from bending everyone to his will.

Overall, I think the sheet could use some work, mostly more detail. I'm going have to say no for now.