ALRIGHTO!

The moment y'all've been waiting for...

@Vec, accepted.
@Rainmaker, accepted. Btw, the Everwinter Mountains are a half day's trek away. To Fullforge Keep is another half-day.
@Fated Fallen, where exacty did Tira get her crossbow? How skilled is she with her shortsword? Could've done better on the gnome description but since I already know what they are, accepted.
@Daird, could you please expand more on [i]why[/i] the Flamekin are sailors? How did she gain her survival skills? Other than that, accepted.
@Fleigling, not sure if someone carries around 1500 gold pieces all day in their pocket (though he may have that at home. Note: A noble's purse is usually filled with 25 gp average according to the 5e Basic Rules). What is Lucien's actual age? Where exactly did he learn swordsmanship?
@ChibiYuki, accepted.
@MyCatGinger, accepted.
@SyrianHamster, accepted.
@Shard, accepted. Btw, does he speak Common?
@Yog Sothoth, accepted. Since he looks a little bulky, I might recommend that he has a negative modifier on his Charisma (DM talk for not-so-charismatic-or-fun-dude), and he has a limited amount of 'rages' where he goes berserk. On first level, usually that's two per day. 
@Necrophage, accepted.

You may post now in the IC if you want to, if you've been already cleared of any errors. I thought it would be interesting if we started out at nighttime.

People who I haven't mentioned here, am reviewing yours as fast as I can. Download the D&D Basic Rules v0.2 from their website. Very good read. Definitely recommend it for stuff like food prices, trade, weapon prices, etc.