Lugubrious, your link for Marowit was not informative at all. I can't accept your character if I don't know it's basis, even if it IS well-written. Besides, being the champion of a god usually doesn't entail being made and having powers not seeming to attribute to your god's powers, as far as I've known from other religions. Please explain it better, or pick a different topic please.

Esayo, your character is acceptable. How did you know I like Egyptian lore?~