@Sep, the Fifth Dynasty looks good. How old, roughly, are the Dynasty and the Empire? Oragos used to be a rather powerful nation itself, and is older than Othea.

@Freeshooter, working on reading it now. Looks interesting so far.

@Ellri, thanks for helping Maki, you're much more thorough and concise than I am in regards to constructive criticism.

@Ink-Berry, I would rather you not control dust since the power has some distinct ways to exploit it. If you want to come up with a different power, feel free.