[quote=Guilty Spark] @Sep, the Fifth Dynasty looks good. How old, roughly, are the Dynasty and the Empire? Oragos used to be a rather powerful nation itself, and is older than Othea.@Freeshooter, working on reading it now. Looks interesting so far.@Ellri, thanks for helping Maki, you're much more thorough and concise than I am in regards to constructive criticism. [/quote] It depends how long the it has been since the Old Kingdom has been around. The Dynasty has been around for a while simply as Kheris' relic lets him heal himself and others (At the cost of slaves lives) which more or less reverses the whole "Aging" thing humanity has going for it. So the Dynasty will probably be as old as you're willing it to be but they've never really been one for expansionism, Kalesians you'd have to check with Ellri but we've never decided who the Empress is or what her relic does, all we have decided is that there is a long running cold war between the Dynasty and the empire.