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Ollo
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Hiya. [quote=whizzball1]
Think you could look this over? It's not done, obviously, but still. Clunky language is easier to find in shorter intervals. If anything seems unrealistic, if language is boring, you know, normal editing stuff.EDIT: BTW, the unpublished view password is PerfectlyNormalKnife.
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Why that password?