Ok Mike right now you do need to make some changes. I do agree with Redwing on a couple of things but I am willing to negotiate on some things too so lets work this out to get your character accepted. First is the area ruled by dragons. While I don't have a problem with there being more dragons in the Land of Dragons I would prefer that if what the heartless were after as the power of the spirit guardian of your family or maybe you had a small mushu like friend that his heart is strong enough, along with yours to draw enough heartless to attack your village. Second-I really am not looking for people to run mutiple characters except me. I am running two for a story reason. Tendra is great and all but over all I don't really think he needs to be in this rp. What you could do is struggle with your inner darkness and maybe have it manifest as a drive form later on. Also you can put something up describing your sister but she probably won't be an active participant unless we go to the Land of Dragons. Third is your current appearance. As long as you don't keep that form and us it as a drive form then I am fine. How would you obtain a drive form you ask? Well your ancestor's spirits could bestow on you the power to combine your form with the spirit dragon you protected so bravely or they could grant you and your little friend that power after the battles over so that you and your mushu like friend can become one in a drive form. Fourth, and this is to set the ancient china thing in stone, use a secondary weapon that pertains to the era and area of which you are coming from. Fifth and final is please include something about Yen-Sid either coming to save you or asking for your assistance so that you will be at the Mysterious Tower world because that is where the story will begin. I am sorry for all the changes but these are the things need to be corrected. If you want to negotiate on them a little then pm me otherwise edit the post with the changes.