will deal with CS later keep in mind its not done and my brain keeps pooping out on me. there will be some changes and some balancing later on just busy.

I was wondering if I could possibly be a..villain of sorts. here is my CS for you to look over and if you are ok with my idea perhaps we may speak of it in length about it.

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Full Name 
Marius Victus 

Fake Name
Andrew roberts

Nickname(s)
Talon master, The Deceiver,The fated Son. Mars, 
Gender
Male

Age
800

Year 
2nd

Birthday
June 6th

Astrological Sign:
Gemini 

Species
augmented human

Class
Order of the Talon- uses a special gauntlet with blades on all fingers but the thumb making it seen it is a claw or talon.. The order uses secrets and the shadows to achieve its goals.(Similar to Assassins of the contemporary world or of antiquity). known for their secrecy and unwillingness to work with others without a vested interested.

Weapon: 3
The ancient and power Dual gauntlets, beautiful yet cruel in their construction. forged by the flame of hate and tempered by time they now have a chance to taste blood. The wearer must prove they are capable of receiving the honor of these blades. These weapons are capable of using limited magic, but the blades are designed to be able at will extend from the gauntlets by an unknown means to their full length. The second weapon known simply as the black blade is a dark weapon created from black magic and forbidden technology. A living weapon with a mind of its own, before one may wield this weapon you must prove to it you are worthy. Finally the Chains or torment. attached to the gauntlet it allows to user to travel over long distances by shooting a chain to stick to walls and surfaces. Normally not a weapon it can be used to drag people closer or to entangle the target in its spiky chains, though this is rare as the chain if seen can be easily knocked away should the target know where it is to land.

World
Earth 

Short Biography
little is known about Marius, except for three things. One he comes from a small village, considered to harbor hate for the new comers. The second being he may not have wanted his fate. he does not remember his past well believing he suffers from some form of insanity rather then his own memories.

Personality
secretive 

Partner 
none as of yet

Fear(s)/Weakness(es)/Limit(s)
due to the process of his creation he suffers from a mild form of insanity in the form of voices whispering to him seeing past friend and foe. Having lived such a long Life has blended in battle he may forget what age he is in. Finally a flaw in his creation has caused him to fall into a uncontrollable state in which he is a danger to friend or foe. as part of the pact with his sword the weapon slowly will break down his body, while this is something he will recover from in time he can't fight with full power for long periods of time. The black blade while still powerful is only a fragment of the true blade, in comparison to the true black blade it is just slightly better then a normal blade at the moment,though it may improve as time goes on. This dark weapon speaks to its wielder to slowly tearing down its owners sanity in combat. One must use extreme care not to give into its temptations or risk being lost to darkness forever. 

Strange Attributes/Abilities/Traits 
side effects of his creation: regenerative abilities,enhanced strength and speed, being able to see perfectly in darkness.

Themesong
none

Other 
can play the guitar, has a pet Wolf dog hybrid named Elisa,speaks several languages. he wears a coat