[quote=Jabber] Anyway, no problem in him having his own crew, but his self-control seems to be quite questionable. Just because he was going to take the blame for the entire murder, he lost his composure and killed an innocent man. That was somewhat dishonorable. I’m not saying that you have to edit your history, these are just my two cents regarding your character.Not wanting to be mean, but just having Nitoryu or Two Sword Style is kind of plain. Don’t you want to assign a theme to your style or at least give it a name? Kumokenryu (Cloud Blade Style) or something. [/quote] I actually like the sound of Cloud Blade Style. It leaves room for more development in his moves. I might have to do a bit more work into developing moves for that though. I will keep the base three techniques I currently seeing as they are basic and I will let the cloud style develop later on. As for the murder, that was the part of my history I was unsure of. I've changed it now so that he committed the murder because he believed his death for a crime he didn't commit would dishonor him.