[b]@Brod[/b]
Several issues regarding your CS. 
First, use the code [Hider] for the entire CS.
Regarding his bounty, how did he get it? What did he do to deserve one?
And for his ability, Logia? If you mean a Devil Fruit, which one? Explain in his history how he got it and elaborate on his level of mastery of the fruit.
Lastly, I've noticed a few typos and certain parts that could use some commas and rephrasing.