@Brods [Hider=Edits]Ever since [b]Edge[/b] could remember[b],[/b] he was always on the waves. His father was a captain of the crew known as The Sea Devils, their ship [b]was[/b] the terrifying Scurvy Demon. If he did something wrong[b],[/b] his father would beat him till he bled. Enjoying the pain, he got in more trouble on purpose until one day he lost it. [b]He[/b] went to his father while he was manning the [b]wheel[/b], drew his [b]dad’s[/b] sword and cut off his head. The crew watched as the kid laughed uncontrollably in the pool of blood. He claimed the ship along with its crew and was named captain at age 10. When Edge turned 15 and was hunting a bounty in the seas[b],[/b] they engaged in conflict. Edge jumped over to the opposing ship and laid waste the crew. He found his way into the [b]captain’s[/b] quarters and begging for mercy the captain offered him [b]a[/b] devil Fruit called the "Moku Moku no Mi"[b].[/b] Edge accepted his offer. He took the fruit in one hand and the captain asked "So I live now right?" short answer, [b]he’s[/b] now in 8 different pieces in a barrel that Edge later on ate. Gaining the abilities of smoke have made Edge even more feared among his crew.[/hider] I didn't focus on rephrasing and just edited a few parts. The ones that are bold are the ones I edited if it wasn't clear. As for the issue of not being able to have Hiders within Hiders, I suggest you just link those images to the text instead of having a wall of pictures in your CS.