[quote=Rayn Night]
Aaaah yes, I misread. I will rectify this immediately
[/quote]

Just read your CS. Make the corrections Headphones stated earlier concerning the timeline of Valaria, and try to add a few sentences alluding to the war against Malfear, like whether or not your character participated, and you'll be fine.

EDIT: But yeah as Headphones said, going more in depth about your involvement in the war, or how it affected your character, would be beneficial.