[quote=Forsythe]
Q:How's this gonna relate to canon, if at all? AU? Before? After? Parallel?
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Parallel. The normal RWBY storyline in the anime will occur, ours will just be in the sort of background. We'll catch glimpses here and there of the anime storyline, but our main focus will be on a different route. 
[quote=LokiLeo789]Semblance: help me[/quote]
This made my day.
Overall, though, This character is much better than the past one, I really like it. Just needs fiddling with the Semblance, which I can help you with through PM.
[quote=pyre101]
Semblance: Activates a rune on his chest that will begin to glow a silvery aura that is visible to all who are not blind. From the light flows out spectral swords. These swords can be used to cut through most armor, except for those that are spectral themselves, another ability (phasing), or any special armors made from dust. Once used, Kael will fall onto ground after use, almost out of breath (having the wind knocked out of you, that feeling). This may be upgraded, depending on GM's decision and if yes, may be implemented later.[/quote]
Is this a Dagger Laser Beam??? It certainly is unique and original, but also insanely confusing. also, the image for the weapon is too insanely small. If you could find a larger image?