No NO NO NO NO! Im not taking offense im just curious. An i was thinking that you just critiquing like i mentioned, but i figured you woulda given me a singular list of greivances. Haha dont worry! Your advice is being taken in notes. So that if i make anothet character like this, i dont make the same mistakes.

Im sorry if my last responce seemed edgey. Trying to rp an put lunch together at the same time.