[quote=Malikoy]
Jeez that was intense! I can see now the amount of fear that Leah must have been carrying around, to have that happened before her eyes is just traumatic! Great start! I'm writing mine now!
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Thank you. I changed it a bit to neaten it up as I'd written it a little hastily. I'm never good with the OP when starting threads :| 

It's so much easier to write when you have posts from others to work from and build on.