[quote=Hebigami Shiho] So, here's my character! :D Don't be afraid to throw some criticism my way, as long as it is constructive. [/quote] Here's a larger alternative image that doesn't have the HTTP across her boobs. [hider=New Image][img=http://cfile202.uf.daum.net/image/11570B474DA85858330963][/hider] We have no objections towards the CS. That random enter on the second paragraph on your Bio made me confused, fix that, but no glaring errors. More of a back story would be nice but not necessary, at least not for me. Approved.