[quote=Avenger]
I agree it is a bad intro, a pathetic one at the least, but it's late at night, I'm tired, and spent about 5 hours previous just drawing, and I'm tired. 
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You're not deleting shit. It's an okay intro and I'm fine with it now that I cooled down and managed to rethink and reprocess the situation. All that it needs is you noticing some details of the room and how you even got in it to begin with. As I said before, I was mostly mad that I wasn't informed of it when I found out Demon and you planned out your interruption whilst me and Demon planned our out the fight. You were just hit by being a bystander in the crossfire