[quote]There is a pretty big age differential between you and Lucian, who are siblings. I would recommend somewhere in your Bio you mention that your father remarried a younger woman, which would make the age gap more plausible. Also, you need to change around the years a little. The earliest you can be born is 18 years ago, meaning you were conceived the prior year, but born when your father went to war. Since the coup began two years after your father left, and ended with his death the third year, I would recommend you say your character left Gorgon around age 2 or 3, since you currently say she left at age 6 (meaning they lingered for a few years after Briar took the throne)[/quote] I'm refitting my character to be around twenty-four or so years of age, and in my bio it mentions that she has [i]"Of course, she was far behind in the line of succession with three elder brothers ahead of her"[/i] meaning that there's plenty of room for her age gap given Lucian is the eldest. This all making my character eight years old when the coup occurred and all that.