All right Eklispe, let’s get to work.

Unfortunately I have to say that your sheet REALLY isn’t up to par with most of the others. There are many errors that we require you to fix if you want to participate. I understand you might be upset hearing this, but this is the advanced section, and we have high expectations.

First off, the picture doesn’t work. We normally prefer worded out descriptions rather than pictures. It’s almost an unspoken rule that a picture can accompany a description to provide extra support or to solidify the description you provided and give others a mental image of your person. Using a picture alone, in my opinion, is lazy and shows a lack of care for the character you are creating.

This RP isn’t anime either. You can have green hair if you really must, but if has to be dyed and your character will be seen as weird for it.

Your personality section is heavily lacking, more details there please.

Your history is… iffy. I’d talk to Allen about that one.

Your power at first glance is okay, but upon further inspection it shows to be not really acceptable. I like how you went for something that’s not entirely combative based, but I’d prefer you make up your mind on what its capabilities are. What it’s capable of from what you’ve seen is far from mundane. That’s LIFE SAVING. Mundane is semi useless. And given it’d ability to produce weaponry as you say, what is stopping you from just producing a sword, or a laser gun, or some other object with no drawbacks? The power doesn’t really have a weakness and isn’t detailed enough for us to make a good call on it.

Refer to the characters Allen, He Who Walks Behind, Leonerdo, or myself make. We try to make sheets that we want to see others make. Try to go into the detail we went into.