[quote=XxLyraxX] [/quote] She seems rather... uninteresting. I like the fact that she's in her own world, but she doesn't seem to have a personality beyond that. This is also not a romance RP (unlike what people think). She says she wants to be loved and love someone. Of course, there [i]can[/i] be romance, but it isn't a the main focus. Also, wouldn't the girl be disinterested in love [i]because[/i] her parents fought constantly? She wouldn't have been exposed to proper intimate contact; thus making her think love is fighting and hating eachother. I don't know. I'm getting too in my head with this. Just fix the personality. [quote=Gtaguy] Be even more unhelpful to a noobie will you. Jeeze. [/quote] I was pretty specific with what I wanted in the Character Sheet (CS). [quote=lothian] I totally put that my guy is a hippy in his bio. so I guess I'm accepted? [/quote] You didn't read the rules. Specifically, rule number 6.