[quote=Zombehs]
Eh, changed it back to this then. Added another weakness.
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I don't see any further problems with it. Kiddo, if you don't see anything else wrong with it, its accepted

[hider=pyrak]Stop right there. Just no. No. For starters, why are you submitting two characters at the same time? As for the other stuff... 
-Your character's appearance is a little too long and unnecessary, mainly the bit with the tattoo. Its just downright confusing. 
-Your personality is suicidal. Huh. Well. Guess what. [b]No.[/b] 
-Your semblance is pretty much another person's Semblance (LokiLeo789's) just edited a little, and even if it wasn't, its just a little overpowered how you can use any kind of force and send them flying, like Goku breathing on Yamcha. No. 
-What the hell does being streetwise have to do with anything?? 
-So. You're a loner. Fun.
To summarize: No. Plain old no. Even if you edited it a lot, just no. There'd have to be something good to anchor it to to change it, and so far there isn't anything. We don't need someone brooding at the window on rainy days thinking suicidal thoughts and glaring daggers at everyone. No.

As for your second character... 
-Hair is [i]always[/i] a grabbing device, unless its shaved off completely or almost shaved off completely.
-WHY ON EARTH IS YOUR CHARACTER 6'8"?? IS THAT EVEN PHYSICALLY POSSIBLE, AND IF IT IS, IS IT EVEN REASONABLE FOR A CHARACTER TO BE THIS TALL??
-Just because you claim to be a hardcore badass does not mean people will see you as a hardcore badass. Often times others will see you as some all talk, worthless showoff. And others that aren't me would see you as mildly annoying and maybe a little arrogant.
-[i][b]How on earth is your long and thin poleaxe [/i][/b](Which should be called just a long battle axe)[i][b] able to turn into a crossbow??[/i][/b]
-All your Semblance means is that you're a volatile battery. What are the uses of that??
-Huh, for once something on your characters I all right. [b][i]For once.[/b][/i]
-THAT sentence was arrogant itself. You're saying its justifiable that shes overconfident because she's not overconfident, she's just too skilled. [i]Get on my lvl n00b[/i]. No. 

Long story short, for both characters, it has come to my realization that there is not enough negative words in the dictionary, and possibly the entire languages spanned across all of mankind to describe perfectly your characters, so I will leave it at a nice and friendly No. [/hider]

Ok, as of now, character submission is pretty much officially CLOSED. We may open up sometime later, but for now, just no.