[quote=IncredibleBee]
I don't get the point of the collab.It wasn't edited for better flow; you can tell that you guys just pasted together a large series of posts made over PM, which defeats the entire purpose. Moreover, unlike a combat scene, which requires a bit of organization, this entire sequence didn't really need a collab of any kind. All it really did was make us think you'd flaked, because you spent days making this.Keep this in mind next time. If you're not doing combat in a google doc, it's better to just post one at a time, like normal.
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I agree with Bee, it paces the game a lot more, gives people time to react and also, nobody wants to be hit in the face with a wall of text after several days. Smaller posts more often are the way to go!