( I fixed it sorta) 
Elvira lashed out at the lioness growling fiercely, Gale bucked the older one off and ran away with a torn backside, Now el had two large lionesses looking at her with deadly eyes "..Im a cub..." she let out a soft laugh and sat submissivly stareing at the ground. The older one had let her off with a warning but this time they both looked like they meant buisness.