I really didn't want to put the GM on the spot, but they sorta asked me to look over his CS and post my opinions. I apologize if the GM didn't want this known, but I don't appreciate being attacked for helping out.

EDIT: I like the character, Verifyin, although I'm not familiar with the qualities of Behemoth horn gratings. Reminds me a little of Harry Potter at first, but not after reading his history~!