Here's my CS:

[hider=Rhea Webb]
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[b]Age:[/b] 13

[b]Year:[/b] 3rd year

[b]Gender:[/b] Female

[b]House:[/b] Hufflepuff

[b]Magical Heritage:[/b] Half-blood, magical mother and Muggle father

[b]Personality:[/b] Ever since coming to Hogwarts, Rhea has thrown herself into a world of magic with a mixture of enthusiasm and anxiety. She tries her best to pay attention in classes, though being the energetic and nervous sort, she finds it difficult to sit still and keep her focus on the task and hand. She tends to notice small details or noises that others don't, like a little fly buzzing around the class room or a flicker of light, and get distracted by these small things quite easily. She just seems to notice and over-analyse every little thing, and this can sometimes cause her a lot of worry and distress, often leaving her with anxious and wary expression most of the time. Still, she's generally polite and tries her best to get along with others, often trying to be a friend to all and peace-keeper during arguments as she hates conflict. She tries her best to please everyone during a tough situation, which can make her seem like a wallflower and give the impression that she doesn't have many opinions of her own. She DOES in fact have opinions, she just doesn't want to come off a nuisance by voicing them and often prefers to let others make decisions for her. However, during her time at Hogwarts, she's gained a slight amount of confidence and a healthy amount of curiosity for the wizarding world she is now a part of.

[b]Backstory:[/b] Before coming to Hogwarts, Rhea's life was unremarkable. Normal school, mostly normal family, her father and brother both being muggles. Her mother, however, was an eccentric witch who constantly talked about her time at Hogwarts and how they were the golden days of her youth, often seeming wistful at times that she gave it up to become a housewife. When Rhea showed signs of magical ability, her mother was over the moon and pressured her daughter into going to wizarding school. Rhea was slightly sceptical. While she had love her mother's stories of magic when she was a child, she wanted to go to the same secondary school as all her muggle friends, and was upset when her mother seemed oblivious to this. After her first year at Hogwarts, she's adapted and let most of her bitterness go, though has been pretty distant around her fellow students, possibly feeling they can't replace her friends and fearing to get close to them. Instead, she spends most of her time talking to Ash, her slightly mischievous owl, and often pretends he can talk back, putting on a silly high-pitched voice for Ash.

[b]Wand:[/b] 11 inch holly wand with unicorn hair core

[b]Personal items and pets:[/b] A barn owl names Ash

[b]Special Gifts and Abilities:[/b] Rhea has yet to excel at anything, simply demonstrating a decent amount of competency in all her subjects. Well, except for herbology and history, both of which she finds dull and uninteresting. As someone who enjoys cooking, her passion is mostly for potions, though she's not exactly "good" at it. She has a tendency to be experimental when mixing potions, usually resulting in her experiments blowing up in her face, and her potions teacher keeps reminding her to "stick to the recipe". She's looking forward to third year and the new classes she'll be able to take this year, namely the classes on Divination and Magical Creatures.[/hider]

What do you think?