[hider=Critiques of Character Sheets]Prints avoid - You are definitely accepted. I love his age and attributes and how similar he is to Remington. I think they should be be sties :) Kirah - I love the idea of twins that are in different houses. I think they could be very interesting. Since they are first years, maybe they can either be friends with Ava or one could bully her or something like that to separate their personalities even further lol Jester - I like your character as well, as far as him fitting in well in a whole different age group. He would still be young enough to stay up with a first year, but is a different age. I'm not sure what I'm saying, but I like him, and I love his age and the fact that he loves quidditch and is in Hufflepuff. Eyeris - I LOVE HIM! His wand only makes me worry because we haven't heard much (if any) about that core. So, if you could just add a little (and it can be complete bullshit if you wish) to your sheet to explain the properties associated with bear tooth cores, that would be lovely. I would also prefer he is the head of Hufflepuff. Feisty-Pants - I like her. She's not the typical professor, I don't think. So I can handle pretty much everything about her. I would like for her to be the head of Ravenclaw.[/hider] I think those are the only ones I haven't critiqued. If I've missed your sheet, please speak up. Aso, the house heads are as follows so far: Ravenclaw - Amelia Hawkins Gryffindor - Neville Longbottom Hufflepuff - Phelix Farrow Slytherin - (no one has claimed) One more thing: Can someone look over the history of the books and movies, and make a list of the classes we need to fill with professors? It would make things a lot easier on me (since I'm having issues typing because of my broken hand…boo to my luck) and would make you my favorite :)