Well, the personality is 12 sentences, the history is about 3 paragraphs, and I put the thing for rule six in the other section. I just spaced out the history because it was huge... As for the picture, that is realistic, but made blurry. Maybe you're thinking of someone else's sheet...?
I'll fix the personality some more, for some reason I can't describe her accurately.

Don't apologize! I wanna work hard to make sure that Winona is up to your standards! ^^