[quote=Monkeypants]
Question : is my app accepted in its current state? I plan on adding a few more cities and some additional people but that be fluff for the most part. Just wondering that before I add a.ny thing new
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Well you said you'd reduce the size of your Empire and I'm not sure if you did that. And the Sky Knights thing is still there...

And given I'd like to have seen a simpler app format since it's all more-or-less fluff anyways: I personally don't care. I'm more than likely to add way more significant people than asked in the application, settlements, and other things. At that point it'll likely turn into a Precipice of War fact-sheet, keeping more a log on the things I introduce so I have stuff to refer to myself.

EDIT - I checked and it does seem a lot smaller. So you're OK given territory.