[quote=MysT3CH] :'( i'd have to rewrite that entire post, everything in it was meant to hint at things relevant to Avis' character.. Besides, i'd also have to rewrite mt second post, which i also wrote to have the same effect T_TEspecially the time, as i had intend to use to demonsrate both his how much he cared about Dallas, as well highlight his diligence. - He left home to stay at his girlfriends house, because his house was too far and he wanted to see his friend Asap (hence the bus trip at the start). Kinda spent alot of time thinking out my first two posts. So they're intimately linked. Not to say you each havent as well, but your posts just seem to be more flexible... [/quote] Oh I understand. Well... It's mostly up to the people who've already posted. I think Sahara arriving first will be important for her character development later though so we might wanna keep her first. As it stands, Avis could still be second to arrive. And if you could get Sahara to change Her arrival time to be earlier, you can go ahead and edit your second post into your first. I could permit you to post again ahead of turn for this once, but next time you need to make sure everyone knows what you're up to. And anybody else who may find themselves in this situation in the future, be sure to share with the group.