I would recommend that you read [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/56672/posts/ooc]this[/url]. It's a 'guide' that highlights the differences between roleplaying and writing (or reading a book). They are not the same thing, not even in the same ballpark. It also talks about pacing and basic story structure, which if you follow, will make things easier for you. I've been thinking about writing my own article that highlights thinking and writing techniques for people who don't have the time or whose muse won't cooperate.