[quote=Feisty-Pants]
WIP! Working on it as we speak, just wanted to let you all see that I WAS doing something.
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There are quite a few things with yours, Feisty. First thing I noticed is her appearance: You're only telling us that she's about as tall as Ikari, and while I know how tall that is, others might not. I'd like if you could elaborate on that and actually put a number on her height. 

Then there's the power section: This isn't a Pen & Paper RPG where you have a certain number of spells, but one where you have some versatile powers. For example there's our Dryad's ability to make roots and vines grow, and control them, but it's not any specific size of roots, or number of them or anything like that. It's something she can do and what she wants to do with that ability is something she decides in the RP. It's a magical ability, not a spell. 

As for her background, first there's how she got recruited: That's not how it happens. If you read my character's background (and I encourage everyone to reader all other players' character sheets) you'll see that they don't force anyone to join, but they look for volunteers. If you volunteer you'll be taken to a facility that will then test what you are compatible with, and after that you'll undergo the process of becoming a Shifter. Said process is not getting injected by anything, however, nor are you required to shave your hair. The process is basically just stripping down 'till you're naked, getting electrodes placed all over your body, and then you're knocked unconscious while in a sort of vertical tube, and while in that you're changed. You can read what it is in my own character's background.