[quote=Teoinsanity] Gonna use an OC that I commanly use in roleplays for weapons instructerName:Unkown ,but people call him"Red Mac"Age:UnkownAppearance : A full head gas mask clad man wearing a black longcoat and jeansGender :malePowers:has a regeneration factor (much weaker then deapools),and has extra human speed ,jumping ,strength And endurance ,knows how to use most weapons,is an an illusion mag(his illusions fool everything but touch)and when he dies,his body will slowly regenrate ,he has machine to speed up the process.Equipment :a desert eagle,a SMG ,ninjato ,Laptop,and a swiss champ XAVT.Personality:insane overall nice guy ,will only take missions that he morally agrees on ,etc..Bio:For a man with no past,the only bio is myths.Some say ,he was born a half-human monstor hybrid,others say ,he is a secret governor super soldier project that escaped.Al l we know,he is a bounty hunter that specializes in goveent dirty-work and and the paranormal,he woke up in a hospital one day,donned the gas mask ,and was reborn ,reborn as red Mac ,Other:always wears a gas mask,is a slight engineer, [/quote] All of the teachers are actual Marvel/DC canon, so I'm gonna have to veto this off the bat. Even if this was for a student, it's way, way too overpowered. He's a mage, and can regenerate, and uses a ton of weapons. Is insane and nice, and has a high moral code? *shakes head* Oh, and has no known past or data. Please, and I'm saying this as respectfully as possible... [b] Please try harder.[/b] This is just a mishmash of cliches, and the lack of past feels more like an excuse not to write a credible backstory.