[quote=Shisa]
It's fine for the most part, I think, but Luanne slipped in behind Selena, Kate, and David and pointed a shotgun at their backs while their concentration was on Dot. She also would have tried to go back into hiding after she heard Callum banging on the door so as to stay hidden, but I didn't post as much so it's entirely possible she was discovered then. Probably not before, though.I really wanted to see how the three would react when they turned around to see an identical girl with a shotgun pointed at them.
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Sorry about that Shisa. I just wasn't entirely sure if Xenonia's post was inferring you would slip away before the three of them realized you were there. I could always go back and edit it if you would like. Though it might not be tonight, considering I have class early tomorrow.