Not a GM, but I personally wouldn't mind bits of the CS being elaborated on when you have the time such as this section:

[quote]For nearly two decades Hark and his tutors have wandered this world, doing their best to keep a low profile. With valeal in full civil war they could not return to his mother's family. Hark had no choice but to move from town to town, performing small jobs for coin when they could. Thulian and Ser Owen would make sure that Hale's last orders were carried out, "Make Hark strong."[/quote]

Might be me speaking from perspective/experience, but that could be fluffed out to a length paragraph or two.

[b]EDIT:[/b] Posted. Lol, and Brand said it takes too long! :F