[quote=Rtron]
The Naga bit: No, he doesn't have to be.The rest of it: I see what you mean. What made sense to my sleep deprived mind is ridiculous in the light of day. I'll rewrite him, after I do a bunch of research and see if I can pull it off. As for the Hammerfell thing I fully admit that was laziness on my part. And tiredness. But I apologise for it.I'll report my progress regularly.
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Good to know, I've provided some links within the critique for you to start with and branch off.