[quote=Lo Pellegrino] @KingFisher: Good post. Looks like Chessa has first blood, huh? Can't wait to see how she reacts as things get worse. [/quote] Cheers! I'm still very much an ameture when it comes to writing, but I'll try and make Chessa's character development as interesting as possible. I really like your narrative pieces BTW, you paint a very vivid picture.